blur

surreal escapades when reality becomes hazy

Disappearing lakes engulfing disenchanted thoughts
The lack of coherence embedded in sand
Windshield moist with raindrops on forgotten mornings
I have not come to accept it, not yet.

A town full of blind people,
Colors taking a walk into dark alleys
Undeveloped photos fading in silver
The road in front is not visible, at all.


© Nothing Personal. March 03, 2011.

Author's Note

It's circumstantial

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like these words. Each line could take you to a different place. This is my favorite kind of poetry. Allow the reader to think and try to see what the writer is saying in their words. Many vision of people and life are hidden in the word. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Magdelena]

Fabulous!!! This made me sit up and gasp. For i so love a piece i can wonder on. So many images within this and I love them all!

Well done.

Mags xx

[Mauricio Montoya]

great job!

[Siddhartha]

to me it feels like the tragedy of homecoming...when the time has long since passed and people changed...or worse still left...it's the pain of coming to terms with reality...loved every word....

[Sunflower 20]

this is a sad tale of the tragedies of live, at least, thats how i see it. your descriptions are wonderful, i especially like the first line. great job! :)

[Calypso]

Very elegant.

[Arabdha]

you have my vision blurred by your words..lovely and enchanting..beautiful artful imagery..goes in straight to my library..loved it !

[Richard Williams]

A good description of a blur like the photos fading into silver.

[Theodore]

This is great! Lost for words...

[Ruth]

This walk through life begins many journeys! What is reality? A stretch of insanity at times lol
Beautifully expressed love!
xx

[Poetic Beauty]

The imagery is quite amazing. I liked this poem it made me feel a bit disconnected to reality.