heaven

Dreamy photos on invisible palettes
Paradise found in magical, myriad islands
Unwinding along the stairs to heaven

© Nothing Personal. February 17, 2011.

Author's Note

a little something

Reviews

[OT]

a little something and then some!! I like! dreamy photos on invisible palettes - such photos must surely be destined never to be seen - dreams fade and if on an invisible palette we're truly screwed hey!! haha oh paradise - is it a myth burdening those stairs - nice!

[Chelsea]

This was a really good poem. I think we all can imagine what heaven is like. I always see sandy beaches, turquoise waters, palm trees, haha. That's what comes to my mind.
Yours was a neat idea, the imagery was very vivid! Great poem!

[paul]

beautiful

[Gone]

Three short lines provking so much comment. More than a little something as our peers all seem to agree.

[.]

wow ..simple but effective..sometimes less is more..

[Art Sun]

We all have a concept of the Heavens ...it is just a step away from our thoughts and our dreams...no?

nice...

[.]

. ah, beautiful ... instantly led zeppelin's stairway to heaven began to play in my head ...

[Emily B]

a perfect jewel . . . lovely

[Geralyn Miller]

A perfect jewel of poetic art, flawless.

[trainwreck]

Very nice little write. I think you're words are even more impressive when they are limited. You're writing is really good in any circumstance, however.