Speechless

Speechless

A Poem by Nothing Personal
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And Lord created thee,
for me to see,
with eyes wide open;
But distances apart,
on days mixed with yellow,
I indeed regret;
for not being there,
for not having seen you,
without silver coated dyes.

"Speechless"

Speechless indeed but it's me
Who has lost of sense of sight and sound
Bewildered in this yellow maze of yours
And this bright corny sunshine.

© Nothing Personal. February 13, 2011.

© 2011 Nothing Personal


Author's Note

Nothing Personal
for the girl I love

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. wow ... an absolutely incredibly poetic piece of writing ... am not on facebook but almost tempted to join it now ... who knows ... maybe soon ... :) ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amazing imagery. Great read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The imagery in this poem is beautiful

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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