lonely crane

lonely crane

A Poem by Nothing Personal
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haiku

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A lonely crane stands
in a pool of murky water
White butterflies watch

© Nothing Personal. February 9, 2011.

© 2011 Nothing Personal


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. ah, yes ... but of course ... the whiteness in this piece of poetry against blue skies and blue water ... is like a beautiful water colour painting ... and on being watched ... not enough can ever be said ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love haiku , love this one

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I can't do these..you have done it beautifully..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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ohh. beautiful

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Not bad for a haiku. its not my favorite format, so I'm a tad bit biased against it. Still, its a good write, like everything else from you I've seen.

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Added on February 10, 2011
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