Broken Dolls

Stolen or not, Thanks to Muse.. A little something I wrote after reading her "Broken Dolls"- the original. Her original features in WC. Check it out !!

Well
Where thoughts can take you
No humans can
Where the mind can take you
No darkness can

A bellow of smoke
A haze of dust
Some lost memories
Some childhood's curses

Broken dolls
I still cry sometimes

© Nothing Personal. January 31, 2011.

Author's Note

Acknowledgment: This poem is a stolen one. The title, the idea, the SOC all came from a lady called Renee and a wonderful poem I read, by her. This is to acknowledge the creative spark only superlative creatives can instigate. Thanks Renee.
Note: Renee said this isn't stolen. Hence, an Inspired write :-)

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

It is still a beautiful peice..

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. wow ... amazingly beautiful ... and poignant ... can't wait to read the "inspiration" ... gonna read it right away ...

[Siddhartha]

Deeply philosophical...meanders through the labyrinth of the memories of innocent times and brings forth an artifact each from long forgotten corners and hiding places...

[An owl on the moon]

With such intricate phrasing you breathe out a world of brokeness and pain... That longing place that looks back and wishes...

[Kerry O'Connor]

I've tracked the path of creativity which leapt like lightning from one artist to the next... This is what makes our community of poets so dynamic - we stimulate one another, are encouraged to branch out, experiment and become better writers.

[MuSe Ampoule]

It's not stolen!!! A great extension, in fact! Thanks so much NP!!!

Honestly...I woke up with the poem and wasn't even gonna post it for thinking it was just word exercise. So glad I did and I love your answer to it! I definitely get the feeling of disillusionment after the anger has waned. Perfect, perfect!