Killer

My first shot at senryu inspired by my friends.

I am a killer,
I shot him twice and then uncovered his face,
I saw myself.

© Nothing Personal. November 11, 2010.

Reviews

[Goodbye]

Whoa, man! This is great! A very, very stark piece of self-reflection...

[Kate Hunter]

The only people who can murder and get away with it are writers. ^_^

[Laura]

I dont really get it.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

O.o

It's thought provoking, but wouldn't be classified as a senryu because it's not 5-7-5 or a total of 17 syllables. I would love to see more attempts from you since you can obviously pack a punch with few words.

[ForTheWorld]

It made me shout woooh!!! I was shocked when I was done reading the lines, a great shock really covered my face, this is a terrific wonderful poem..

[Poetic Beauty]

This is dark. Not sure what the situation was but it doesn't sound like a good one.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

oh s**t thats a scary thing to see....