Killer

My first shot at senryu inspired by my friends.

I am a killer,
I shot him twice and then uncovered his face,
I saw myself.

© Nothing Personal. November 11, 2010.

Reviews

[Ice QueenJen]

What a terrific poem, like looking in the mirror!

[Magdelena]

Wow. Nicely done a huge bravo on this one!

Mags xx

[luciddreamer]

Lot of meaning in so few words....awesome write :)

Peace
Robin

[Adam :P]

wow impressive. powerful and short to the point. love that.

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

amazing. :)

[Black Cat Fever]

Wow, very impressive.

[YouoweYoupay]

Oh my God strikingly powerful three lines. I congratulate you. Keep writing!

[Jeff]

Very cool!

[Karen666]

nice

[Kerry O'Connor]

Yes, this is a winner. Profound, succinct, flawless.