Halloween

Its not your regular Saturday,
As you wait all alone in the dark,
Distant rumbling of thunder far away
Shrieks of laughter & spattered happiness.

Masks, Colors , Blood keep you merry
Blazing music and burning tonics create frenzy,
Expect anything on a night like this
As the world sways to and fro.

Oh its relentlessly unrelenting,
Cant you live your regular Saturday?
The hunger tonight is demonic
You have to eat all while you can.

Few crashes here and there,
Few screams drown away
Few laughter turns to tears,
As the night lives on.

Desires are meant for impulses,
Burning hands seek ice,
Incensed smells & luscious lips
Are all for you tonight.

She looks at you with bright blue eyes
A streak of auburn in her hair,
Black is appalling goes through your mind
As distances disappear.

Passion birds & vermilion fireflies,
White mixed with brown desire,
Of green grasses & blue skies far away,
So much longing yet so much fear.

© Nothing Personal. October 30, 2010.

Reviews

[OT]

slightly more formulaic than normal NP! which I obviously love ;) and a rather consistent rhyme scheme sneaking through though you try to fight it off haha as always such a great play on words (relentlessly unrelenting = great!!) and a strong meaning woven in to the tapestry as well!!

[Ice QueenJen]

Interesting take on the spooky night of the year!

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Totally agree with Mrs. Invisible!

[Dark Empress]

Awesome and scary poem!

[Goodbye]

Your lines, "Desires are meant for impulses,Burning hands seek ice,Incensed smells & luscious lipsAre all for you tonight." is an absolute scorcher!

Yikes! It's scary, yet seductive...

[Dushyant Thadani]

Well written poem. I enjoyed reading it. Yep there is a little naughtiness in the poem, which I love a lot.

[Amanda]

Very well written

[MuSe Ampoule]

Very good! I felt the spooky, mischievousness in the air!

[Misty Blue Eyes]

i liked that....very cool..better then mine