Invisible

You know what they like
You know what they want,
You know what they do
But they don't know you.

You know what it takes
You know how to make,
You know whom to fool
But life still eludes you.

You still dream of lights
You still believe in lies,
You still ooze with hope
But they don't care anymore.

You can run away
They can stay far away,
But the truth still remains true
You and them shall meet soon.

© Nothing Personal. October 21, 2010.

 

Reviews

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This comes across to me as a piece about manipulation, specificaly the kind that occurs online. Yet, the last stanza takes away from that idea and leads me to think more realworld. I'm not sure really... It's a deep poem for me and could be symbolizing a great many things. In a way it's almost like two opposing forces that had used eachother and are now on a course towards mutual revenge. It's nicely formated and flows well though! xD

Hugs! - Ash

[Josephine]

I really like this, it can be taken from many differnt angles, I like the last two lines of inevitability...very good!

[Dushyant Thadani]

This poem shows the callous attitude, which everyone portrays at times. Beautifully written. Very deep work, interesting work, and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for bringing such a beautiful work forth

[Nothing Personal]

Thank you Wolfie. The structure of the poem is pretty open and i guess it makes it relatable.

[Wolfwind Words]

Well writen Ink! Reminds me of family gathers with all the kin folk back in the day for me. Very relatable.

Wolfie