Out There

1st Poem!

Out in the Mists of Ancient World, 

Out in the Terror of No Return, 

Out in the Cold of Survival. 

No Thing to Hold, 

No Where to Run, 

No One There. 

A Quest to Fulfill, 

A Deed to be Done, 

A Life to Save.   

S.I.E. 

Author's Note

This is my first, so please be kind!

Reviews

[therisa]

A very interesting and well written first venture, into the world of poetry, Northern Woman. Reading your response to Ana Sophia, this poem is, about the Norsemen, I feel it could, also talk about the aboriginal cultures, around the world. It has that spiritual quality, to it.

[Northern Woman]

Thank you! I never thought about it that way :) thanks :)

[therisa]

Your welcome, Northern Woman. I do hope, you continue to share your writing with us.

[Northern Woman]

:DDDDDDDDDDDD

[Sami Khalil]

An excellent theme that is out of the ordinary. Bravo.......

[maria ( rose)]

wow ! I'm impressed. I like the whole Vikings theme..clever.
Welcome aboard.

[Northern Woman]

Thank you! :) I love Vikings ;)

[maria ( rose)]

you're welcome:))

[Matching Socks]

Very cool first poem.
I read a lot of fantasy and play a lot of video games...
It has that sort of old world feel about it.
Pick up the sword and fight for what you believe in...
Each quest is a start of something new.
Unlocking secrets/mysteries of ancient worlds.
A life to save, a dragon to slay...
Nice job. What are the initial S.I.E.?
Are they yours or do they mean something?
Just wondering...

[Northern Woman]

Thank you! It was written with Vikings in mind :). The initials are my name :) Thank you so much for the wonderful review! :)

[Matching Socks]

Vikings! Of course! :-)
That's perfect.