You and Me

I present you

with my tattered

fragile heart.

 

I offer you

my worthless but

undying love.

 

I wrap my arms

around you and pray

that you feel safe.

 

I die a little inside

each time I see the pain

deep in your eyes.

 

I kiss the tears

from your cheeks as my heart

falters when I see you cry.

 

I lay my head

on your chest and smile

at the sound of your heart.

 

I miss you

and hope in vain

that you miss me too.

 

I love you

And always will

Will you love me too?

Reviews

[SwEet PeA]

A simple and complicated wish. To reach for the dream and hope you can live up to it.. This is so vulnerable. It is what most fear to say. To offer ones self completely ,even submissively exposes too much and yet the desire is so great...as if you will die without them anyway, so why not.

Beauty , honesty , and caring from an honest damaged place bravo !

[Sugar Plum ♥]

very sad...

[Ms.Bri]

..Emotions are felt in these words. The feeling of knowing you love someone and always will yet questioning theirs I know so I relate. Well written keep writing ;)100

[WhiteWillow]

To bear your soul is the ultimate love. Beautiful write

[Emily Rae]

The pain of not knowing makes for a real ending

[Kaylor Mason]

This is very wonderful

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Really... Really... Really... Brilliant... Work. I like it .... Specially ' The wrap...feel safe' I also selved in my writerscafe library. I am speechless...
Keep it up... God bless you!

[DeevaMarx]

Aw! Now I hate this becuase I can relate to it. I also really loved how you write those beautiful moments and the vaunerable question 'Will you love me to?'

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Breath taking work.
Romantic and Elegant.
Pure Sweetness.

[sivan]

Your poems are so simple and yet filled with emotion that everyone can relate to. good stuff