Thoughts of a Masochist

Use me, Abuse me,

And I’ll love you forever more.

Slice me, Dice me,

And you’ll hold me from the core.

 

Choke me, Provoke me,

And I’ll be forever in your debt.

Slap me, Scratch me,

And my desires will be set.

 

Bite me, Fight me,

Come on, do your best.

Hurt me, Harm me,

Till I’m laid to rest.

 

Chain me, Drain me,

Tie me to the bed.

Whip me, Rip me,

See those lovely lines of red.

 

Command me, Demand me,

Make me writhe and burn.

Invade me, Destroy me,

Make me twist and turn.

 

Break me, Wound me,

And you’ll know I never lie.

Kill me, Silence me,

And I’ll never leave your side.

         NOW

Bruise for me, Bleed for me,

It’s my turn in charge.

Scream for me, Die for me,

Criminal at large.

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

I think Wow, as Yossi put it, fits really well. When the masochist is done being the victim and takes command, it's like getting grabbed by the throat and slammed against a wall. The conversion from helpless victim to dominant abuser was INTENSE. Beautifull written, and the simplicity of the prose style only adds to that effect. Also with this one, the cursive script font adds a seductive, sinuous draw to it--layering the violence and pain with overtones of grace and beauty. Wonderful work, ma'am.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Man...I love this poem.
What a Kickass Song it would make.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Wow .... so powerfully written .... made me wonder ... teasing poetry Yossi