Death Sentence

Not all endings are happy.

This world,
Of colorful lies.
Life is a b***h,
And she's sucking me dry.
I'll warn-
About the devil's disguise.
He's in my TV,
With our memories on rewind.
Your words,
Are just like a knife.
Precisely they slit,
And show my insides...
This place,
Is dark as any abyss.
Don't know where I'm going,
Just like when we kissed.

And everything's a big ball of confusion-
With me orbiting around your fingertip...

I'm captive,
By your pair of cuffs.
Just like when you look at me,
I can't get enough.
I'm struck,
By the gun on your tongue,
Barrel down my throat-
With our moans sung...

I love how you blow me away-
Everyone can see what I'm thinking on display!
And everything's a big ball of confusion-
With me ending up paralyzed and stiff...

Now walk away,
Without saying a word.
I'm cold and distant,
Even though I've been burned.
My heart, you left on the floor.
In a while I'll pick it up...
And hate you;
You w***e.

And everything is starting to make sense.
When I take your last breath away and hide the evidence.
And there is no such thing as a happy end-
Loving you like this was a death sentence...

Reviews

[Breezie Kae]

Great poem, as always. :)

[EverEmma]

Heartbreaking and powerful. I felt his/your pain. It was deep, punctured, tattoed with names of past lovers. Your deep scars translate powerfully to your writing. Bravo

[Rose Tyler]

Ouch. The story behind it is harsh, but another excellent piece Ren :D
I love the choice of words and always look forward to reading/reviewing your works!