Blueprint

I close my eyes in this room.
It's all spinning,
Feeling like I'm in another dimension.
Letting go of tension and the stresses of reality.
Fall into myself and enter a state that leads to my principality.
In my head,
Is a room of treasures.
Legendary and rare,
You can't help but stare.
At the beauty of my imagination.
Just a taste of it, exhilarates your sensations.
This is a world of captivation,
A single nation of unity that is repaired from devastation.
There were cracks on a broken heart,
But they were painted over for a fresh new start.
And the view from the top is art,
Looking down at the world which seems so far...
Wishing that all these people knew,
What it was like to be on a brand new "new".
And the way the moon shines down is invigorating.
Like finding a new dream that's worth chasing...
What a world,
Perfection in my head.
A blueprint of what I will bring back to show those plagued by unhappiness and dread.

Reviews

[razholandr]

Very interesting poem :) I liked it
Great read

[ebur™]

great poem it had a unique topic and it was well written and i liked the occasional rhyming. awesome job! :)

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

I love the whole notion of blueprint, great write! ---mishel

[Wolfbaby]

Great poem! It had good flow and you put feeling into. Imagination is one of the best things of a great mind. We'd certainly live in a heck of a boring world without it. :D You did good with the overall structure of the poem and had good punctuation. Keep it up!

~Wolfbaby