Awakening

Awakening

A Poem by NormaZ
"

The earth wakes up

"

A white raven

perches on a 

black fence


and the eyeless flowers

stretch out toward

the sun


they listen to the

earth


rumbling 

awake

© 2024 NormaZ


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Surreal, dreamlike and very impressive. Incidentally I once saw an albino Raven.

Posted 9 Months Ago


NormaZ

9 Months Ago

Thanks, that’s really cool that you saw one, I heard they are pretty rare.
I like thie idea of the white raven.
not a black raven on a white fence.
The raven is good here and the fence is flawed.
"eyeless flowers/ stretch out toward/ the sun"

Blind people reach out just as those who can see well....they know there is something to reach for, they can feel there is.
The earth wakes up...why won't people....
we are acting eyeless, voiceless....powerless...
but if we have our own awakening, perhaps there can be strong change.
Love can be the white raven, much like the white dove.
The black fence to me represents our politicians who won't get off the fence and get things done to help the country.
there needs to be a rumble, an awakening.
just like in the movie "Awakenings"---
this piece suggests so much with so few words.
j.
j.

Posted 9 Months Ago


NormaZ

9 Months Ago

Thanks for the review J, I really appreciate your comments. I hadn’t thought of it that way. There.. read more
The flowers must listen to the earth, because it is the latter which gives it its nourishment….the day awakens with the raven’s call….your images are clear and lovely…many early morning happenings……
Warmly, B

Posted 9 Months Ago


NormaZ

9 Months Ago

Thanks Betty!
Betty Hermelee

9 Months Ago

You’re very welcome Norma
Warmly, B
Succinct, well written. Love the images you paint

Posted 9 Months Ago


NormaZ

9 Months Ago

Thanks for the review Jess!
Oh so lovely , "eyeless flowers" like a babe yet unborn
Love this image very much .. 🌹

Posted 9 Months Ago


NormaZ

9 Months Ago

Thanks Stella for the review!
Stella Armour

9 Months Ago

Always welcome :)
Beautiful!

Sunday is perfect now. Norma7, thank you so many thanks

Posted 9 Months Ago


NormaZ

9 Months Ago

Thanks Emma! Your encouragement means a lot.
Would a white raven say "Nevermore?" Nah, wouldn't be the same.

Posted 9 Months Ago


NormaZ

9 Months Ago

Ha, ha, agreed! There really are white ravens, very rare.
A very visual piece dear Norma. You captured the moment in so few words. Well done.

Chris

Posted 9 Months Ago


NormaZ

9 Months Ago

Thank you Chris!

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Added on February 24, 2024
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NormaZ
NormaZ

Methuen, MA



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