We Met

About a stranger I decided to meet, but ended up being more…

It was at the train station,
beginning of an unknown temptation.
There he was waiting,
should the risk be taken I was debating.
As our eyes met,
the attraction for one another set.
The stranger had an alluring charm,
would getting to know bring harm?
Black and golden ring he wore,
breezy night, an evening with a lot more.

Author's Note

Any constructive feedback is appreciated ☺️

Reviews

[Ken e Bujold]

ah the allure of the forbidden. nice write Noor.

one small tweak you might want to consider, in the line "'would getting to know be harm" a little awkward to the ear, maybe a change to "bring" keeps syllable count if that a must, but reads cleaner

ken e