My happy place

My happy place

A Poem by Noor.92
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A description of my living place which i have always loved to imagine..

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Far from the madding crowd, 
Streams run like curling snakes 

Quiet and serene, filled with solitude 
A soft breeze whistling around 
Small raindrops moistening the ground  

The house at the top of the hill, 
with smoke puffing out of roof

The walls covered with natural grass, 
And the birds chirping lively songs 

Evening tea is the best part of it all 
In this charming land, during fall  

Yet one thing is missing, to complete it all 
A tender-hearted companion to enjoy a blitheful stroll

© 2018 Noor.92


Author's Note

Noor.92
Just a short dreamy poem out of my love for natural sceneries...reviews are always welcome.. ☺️

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Truly lovely Noor. A lovely gentle, descriptive write. Just one little thing I would to point out. If you make two lines out of "The house at the top of the hill, with smoke puffing out of roof" it would look more even. Just a thought dear.

Thank you for submitting this to our Group writing!

Kind regards
Helena






Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

6 Years Ago

thank you for your kind suggestion Helena..Good day :)



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Scenery=very good and strong here;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

6 Years Ago

thank you for the compliment ! :)
You described a beautiful place. I agree with the ending. Always better with good company. Thank you Noor for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

6 Years Ago

happy you liked it Coyote! :)
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.
Wow, such a place surely sounds so marvellous. Even just reading it and imagining to be living in such a place is giving me some sort of tranquillity!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

6 Years Ago

That's my wish even since to live at such a place, Saman..:) thanks for liking!
Truly lovely Noor. A lovely gentle, descriptive write. Just one little thing I would to point out. If you make two lines out of "The house at the top of the hill, with smoke puffing out of roof" it would look more even. Just a thought dear.

Thank you for submitting this to our Group writing!

Kind regards
Helena






Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Noor.92

6 Years Ago

thank you for your kind suggestion Helena..Good day :)

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Added on January 23, 2018
Last Updated on January 24, 2018
Tags: Valley, stream, hills, evening tea

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Noor.92
Noor.92

Pakistan



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I am an Environmentalist or one can say, an Environmental Scientist. Writing is just my hobby since childhood. Now when I am free from other chores and in my own world, I yearn to write and put my f.. more..

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