Surely, time flies even faster then we anticipate and what is left behind are mere memories. In this race of life we hastes to get to a point, to be 'someone', without acknowledging the moments and people we are blessed with. In the end we do reach our goal but it is then we realize that we have left behind our beloved ones that, once we thought, were holding us back from this race. As you have said,
'All will be new, all will be bright
But what will I do alone in that bright light?'
...life is not merely a race to get to a point, it's a journey in which not a single moment can't be forgotten.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Indeed Saman, you artistically summarized all feelings and thoughts hidden behind these few words of.. read moreIndeed Saman, you artistically summarized all feelings and thoughts hidden behind these few words of mine.. :)
Surely, time flies even faster then we anticipate and what is left behind are mere memories. In this race of life we hastes to get to a point, to be 'someone', without acknowledging the moments and people we are blessed with. In the end we do reach our goal but it is then we realize that we have left behind our beloved ones that, once we thought, were holding us back from this race. As you have said,
'All will be new, all will be bright
But what will I do alone in that bright light?'
...life is not merely a race to get to a point, it's a journey in which not a single moment can't be forgotten.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Indeed Saman, you artistically summarized all feelings and thoughts hidden behind these few words of.. read moreIndeed Saman, you artistically summarized all feelings and thoughts hidden behind these few words of mine.. :)
Love is always beautiful and never lonely. I would work in stanzas, it reads more fluently and more comprehensable. Although it's a beautiful poem. Well done. :)
Rudi
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
will try to write next one in that format. thanks for suggestion.. :)
I find this enjoyable and quite true. I don't know your age, but you seem very aware of life in later years. We travel far in our journey, and memories are invaluable.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thanks for the kind review Sir.. I m 22 but it seems like I have already spent quite a long time...:.. read moreThanks for the kind review Sir.. I m 22 but it seems like I have already spent quite a long time...:-)
Memories are such sweet remembrances....they get us through the bad times and make us smile even when the world is dark. Those we loved and who loved us back never really leave us. What a warm write this is. Lovely. Lydi**
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
True this is. With time, even people change but memories don't...
Thanks for appreciation Lyd.. read moreTrue this is. With time, even people change but memories don't...
Thanks for appreciation Lydia. Means a lot for me...
I am an Environmentalist or one can say, an Environmental Scientist. Writing is just my hobby since childhood.
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