Where are you dear?

I was so lonely,

Surrounded by two hundred people,

but still lonely in my mind,

Then you came,

You fill my world,

And I knew what  was missing from me,

I became happy again,

I became me again, 

Then you run away,

Disappeared like if you were a ghost,

 I gushed searching for you,

At every place, at every corner, I knew,

But I didn't find you,

You have gone and will never come back to me,

Like if you were a salt and melt into the sea,

I screamed while the rain was falling, at the middle of a street I've never been in,

" where are you, dear?" " why did you come into my life if you should leave me that way"

Now I am lonely again,

alone, broken and missing you.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Some people sadly cross paths for weeks or days never years
A lovely write ✍️

[Fly]

Alone we came & alone we need to go. We search for companions to & fro & in return gets sorrows get broke....

[Daniel Valentine Rivera]

It really is terrible to enjoy somebodies presence and then all of a sudden there just not around anymore, especially if that person brought so much life out of you. Relatable. I especially loved the line "Like if you were a salt and melt into the sea" that was genius. Lovely poem! I hope you find someone else you can be yourself around. 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem dear friend.
"At every place, at every corner, I knew,
But I didn't find you"
When the love disappeared. Old heart must suffer. Thank you Nora for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Nora]

You're welcome :), and thank you so much for your review

[Coyote Poetry]

Always my pleasure dear friend. Have a safe and fun New year.

[R.E. Ray]

A sad tale so bravely expressed; unmasked vulnerability in the purest sense. And, yet, I see strength, and the will to stand alone. Nice work!

[Nora]

Thanks Robert :)), appreciate it

[Nebula]

Sad and beautiful
A person can change everything
Or destroy everything

[Nora]

Thank you so much for your review, appreciate it