My ugly brown eyes

Based on true situation :)

" you're ugly " he said angrily then jammed his hands in his front pockets coldly " you're so ugly " .

" excuse me ! " i gasped. 

" you heard me , I said you're so ugly " he replied " I mean , look at your ugly brown eyes ! , they are not even attractive " .

" Excuse me sir " I said with my forehead puckered " you didn't even see them in the sunlight!  , they turn sepia " .

" I did,  i saw them in the sunlight, and they are more uglier " he claimed. 

" you know ! ,you're too proud,  too damn proud " I replied then rolled my shoulders to leave ,but his voice stopped me

 " at the end of the day proud is better than ugly " .

I turned around again,  he was standing and his eyes bored into me .

" i hate you " i screamed , squared my shoulders. 

Then i turned away. 

" I hate you too " he shouted confusedly while i was leaving the place " I even hate your ugly roundish almond brown eyes....even under the sunlight "

Author's Note

It's not a poem, it's not even a story, but I'd like to share it with you guys

Reviews

[Donna]

To me, brown eyes are the most beautiful ever!

[Nora]

Aw! Thank you so much, Donna, that's nice of you ❤

[Coyote Poetry]

The boy is a fool. Brown eyes or sepia are beautiful. Many good songs about the brown eyes girl who stole your heart. Old wisdom. Don't pay attention to people with worthless words. They are meaningless. Thank you Nora for sharing your words and the story.
Coyote

[Nora]

My pleasure coyote :)), and thank you for your nice words and review, appreciate it

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure Nora and you are welcome.

[barleygirl]

I find it to be a talent to be able to convey a significant social message by crafting a conversation this way. You've done a great job of showing us a disagreement that could stand for many different things in life that divide people. Brown eyes is a perfect analogy for any physical trait that someone is criticizing about. The ridiculousness of this argument is a perfect example of how obvious it is when people put you down for dumb reasons! (((HUGS))) fondly, Margie

[Nora]

Yeah exactly, people find a really silly reasons to hate on each others, thank you so much margie ❤❤❤

[pencil]

story or not, i really enjoyed reading this. i think the one silver lining to unfortunate events, fights, and negative things in life is that they give us more material for our art and writing.
thank you for sharing this!

p.s. brown eyes are BEAUTIFUL. even without the sunlight.

[Nora]

Yeah, exactly, our negative things in life keep inspiring us to write ,
Thank you so much for your lovely review :)

[Linda alexander]

Persons with brown eyes are the most trusty worthy that is the usual saying and under sunlight they so beautiful too. It is not too uncommon if one see cat and they meant to see them as dog they will try. Thought provoking writing.

[Nora]

Thanks for review, appreciate it :)

[Samuel Dickens]

The message I get from this is that people can find the most trivial of reasons to hate another person. If it's not eye color, then the hater will find something else, like height, the way you sneeze or religion. In all, there's just too much hatred in the world and not nearly enough love.

[Nora]

Yeah , exactlly, that was my hidden message

[wordman]

sounds like he really did lobe those eyes,i mean he described them at the end,so he was looking close

[Nora]

Yeah ! , that's make us wonder , maybe he loves the eyes , but he said that because he is just jealous of something :)

[wordman]

people are funny,brown eyes are pretty

[Nora]

Just a few people think that

[wordman]

they even wrote a song about it,,my brown eyed girl,,don`t it make my brown eyes blue

[Nora]

Lol , then i have to hear that song 😂

[wordman]

it`s on you tube

[Nora]

Yeah , i heard it , it's so cool :))

[wordman]

there you go

[Nora]

Thanks for your lovely comments :)

[wordman]

well,i am kinda nice,most of the time,lol
merry christmas

[Nora]

Merry Christmas :)))

[Abraham George]

Your eyes are a maze where I am lost

Maze are also ugly( for some A*****e) I like that eye you put in profile picture. I thought it was a real happened incident with you.

[Nora]

Yeah it's a real incident :))

[Abraham George]

Happened to you?

[Nora]

Yeah , happened to me :)

[Abraham George]

and is that your eye you put there?