Your True love

Story about two broken hearts

Why do you do this to me ? 

I don't deserve all that pain 

You kill me 

You kill me literally 

Everytime you come to me to cry between my arms because you couldn't find your true love 

You 're crying because all of them cheating on you 

You 're crying because you thought you finally found your true love but you were wrong

Everytime you ask me for advice

Everytime you ask me for a hug 

And Everytime you do that, i want to scream at your face

Scream and say " are you blind ? " 

" don't you see me ? "

" don't you even care about me? "

" don't you feel how much i love you? "

But everytime i try to tell you,  you come to me laughing, smiling,hugging and shouting that you finally found your real true love 

And i laugh , i smile , i hug you , and i congratulate you

Then i go to the bathroom

Crying,  screaming,  vomiting, and hurting myself. 

A few days later you come to me again 

Crying and screaming,  exactly like the million pervious times before 

You say your heart is broken 

And you are crying in my arms again 

You ask for a hug again 

I want to slap you instead of hugging you 

But i never did it 

I just hug you even tighter than the last time , kissing your forehead, and crying with you like if i am a baby between your arms .

Hoping you find your true love 

Hoping you find me 

Author's Note

Can you ignore my grammatical errors please?

Reviews

[G Lucas Kolthof]

I hope you don’t feel like this anymore ❤️

[Nora]

Sorry for the late reply 😊, thank you , I don't feel like this anymore, Thank God, I am happy and cool 😃😃😃

[Fanicia E.]

I know that hurts. This is sincere and I'm glad you wrote it because this experience is familiar to so many

[Nora]

Yeah it's so familiar and painful at the same time, thank you so much, fanicia for your review :)))

[Donicca Dona L]

damn I feel this poem.
I hope truly that one day he opens his eyes and see whats in front of him.

[Nora]

I hope that too :)

[Unspoken poet]

aww such an emotional read, powerful as well
I enjoyed reading this.

[Nora]

Happy to hear that :), thanks for your review :))

[CMC]

This has a very powerful sense of longing woven into it. I love how vivid it seems, and it just emphasizes "I want you to see me, look at me and want me."

[Nora]

Thanks for review sir :)) 😂

[CMC]

You are welcome :)

[barleygirl]

I spent a year being friends with a guy like this . . . we ate lunch together every day at work, while he told me all about this lady he loved, but could not have, becuz she was the girlfriend of his best friend. Finally, I just had enuf & gave up all the good things about that friendship becuz I was sick of being a wallflower in his life. I hope the narrator of this message can find the self-love to get out of this ridiculous waste of time & energy. It's just a constant reminder that you're nothing. Don't do that to yourself. Your story is well-written to provoke me this way. I can't stand hearing this hopelessness. It's realistic, but not very satisfying as a steady diet of what you have to say to the world (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Nora]

You are my favorite reviewer like ever :))) , thanks for your notes i take them seriously

[wordman]

next time he comes,stand him in front of the mirror and stand beside him and tell him his true love is in that mirror

[Nora]

Hahaha , i hope if he is a real character to stand beside him at front of the mirror, that writing based on my imagination and some of my confusing emotions

[wordman]

oh well,you have a vivid imagination

[Nora]

Well , that's so true :))