Who are you!

Who are you when no body's watching !

Who are you when you close your room's door and be all alone !

Who are you when you cry in darkness under the light of the moon ! 

I think you something greater than you show us  , i think you are so deep 

Maybe you will lie to me again tonight

but i can see the sadness in your innocent eyes , moving like waves of sea 

Just wipe your make up off and be who you really are 

At the end of the day your sadness not crime so far !

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems just read this with your soul

Reviews

[paperliz]

I love it so much, this poem can relate to a many people...and your grammar errors are not a problem because it is a beautiful poem

[Nora]

Thank you so much , your review made my day :)))
Actually i have to say " ignore my grammatical errors " because I am not native English speaker, i just learned the language by myself at home .

[Fanicia E.]

I love the poem, it speaks volumes. Makes you wonder why we try to hide emotions that so many can relate to.

[Nora]

Thanks for your support 💖

[Fanicia E.]

You're very welcome :)

[rowan.taylorrr]

besides the grammar issues, I really enjoyed reading this

[Nora]

Aww! Thank you so much

[CMC]

"Who are you when you close your door to be all alone?" That's my favourite line of the piece, and I love how much it pushes for the person looking in the mirror to see how much depth and potential they have. It's amazing.

[Nora]

Appreciate it, thanks

[CMC]

You're welcome :)

[Sofia]

I loved it. The first stanza was amazing. It was a great write. Keep writing :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

wonderfully wonderful.....great one.

[Nora]

Aww , thank you so much dear

[keith]

a message of acceptance of one to another with a compassionate approach of it's ok, be who you are
good write

[Nora]

Thank you a lot keith 😊😊😃

[Surya]

Well a provoking thought actually and a great message...be who you are....I loved it...:)

[Nora]

Thank you Surya

[wordman]

who are you when i`m not looking ,lovely thoughts

[Nora]

Thank you a lot 💟 i really appreciate your review 😊

[wordman]

my pleasure