I am a star

Can you understand her ?

"Who are you ? " He asked confusedly 

She laughed sorely and whispered,  "I am a star"

He looked at her deprecatingly and said " really!  , but i have never watched you on TV before,  i think you have a serious mental illness"  

She smiled a half smile while she was flipping her dark short hair 

" you are such an idiot,  exactly like all of the people here , i am a star literally,  star like those stars above us , i think you will never understand me " she said and pop out , but his voice stopped her 

" wait , just tell me more " he shouted 

She looked at him and then looked at the sky with shining green eyes " I am a star , exactly like the stars above  , they are shining beautifully from a distance but if you get closer you will find flaming stuffs " she explained. 

The sky began to rain so she stopped speaking and closed her eyes , But he became more confused so he said " what do you mean ? , i can't understand anything " 

She smiled and said " see ! , I told you...." 

Then she pop out between the heavy rain and disappeared like ghost. 

Author's Note

Your reviews make me improve myself

Reviews

[rowan.taylorrr]

i absolutely love this piece. it's very mysterious and it's beautiful as i can feel the emotion in both characters very well. good job!!

[Nora]

Yeah happy for that 😊 i feel like i made this better than before, thanks for your reviews , and your opinion alway matters ❤❤

[keith]

a perfect example of single train of thought ... tunnel vision
how often is one approached thru stereotyping
sad that many need be hand fed endlessly the existence of the big picture ...
'I can't understand anything'

[Nora]

Actually I couldn't get your own point of view, make it clearer please 😊

[keith]

one says you are not a star because you have not been on tv ...
limited opinion limited observation ... self imposed ignorance