Black

A deeper look into my thoughts of a broken relationship

Black
By: Noofwise

I'm addicted to the lesser thing in life.
Like sunshine, a cool breeze,
or a good woman's touch.
I don't need substance
to get my by.
I'm high!
I'm not coming down!
You've done this to me!
But where are you now?
I'm crash landing hard
to ground I've never known.
Confused, scared, miserable, and alone,
I've taken up substance to fill
the feelings once there.
My heart is breaking,
but i know you don't care.
I'll cut a little deeper
and drink a little more.
Maybe I'll sleep,
or die,
and i wont think about it anymore.
The hardest part
is remembering the things
we once had.
This gun to my head
will take care of all that.
Nothing they say will change me
or make you come back.
Hand on cool metal, trigger pulled.....
Black....

Author's Note

I'm still new and developing.
I'd like to know your thoughts and feelings.
Thank you
-Noofwise

Reviews

[falling_toxic_rain]

Hmm. I like the method of dots,
But I think if you wpyld create different stanzas as you love around in the emotion would add a little touch.. although I think its pretty good.

[misfit_joker]

I think you should be alittle more metaphoric, if that makes sense. But great none the less