A Curse

Captured silently by the invisible net of a goddess, my hands are tied around my body. I surround myself in a circular attempt to free and drown all that I am. Strings of glowing fiber, the saliva of the mouth of the witch. Cursed he who is a victim, sacrificial be his flesh, blessed his fire-smoke. Who is that? Recall the memory to a deep landscape of collective horizons. There it would all make sense. Cursed I am. Suspended about on a claustrophobic death bed, I kick around hoping to rejoice in my freedom. Lost causes always play out to be a glimmer of hope. Cursed be he who dresses in black gowns and rides a dark haired horse. Cursed be his destiny. Cursed, he who has Faith. Cold Ice, physical vibration escapes me and I let go. Give up my shredded heart to her and I become The Curse, the unwelcome pounding fists on the wall, a symbol of immortality engraved on a life, secluded to a mystical nonsense world of majestic delusions. TRUE Delusions dreamt up by a psychotic psyche. The land of eternal infancy, paradise. That's where I'll be.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You must be a reader. I feel Dante inferno and myth/tale in your words.
"Give up my shredded heart to her and I become The Curse, the unwelcome pounding fists on the wall, a symbol of immortality engraved on a life, secluded to a mystical nonsense world of majestic delusions. TRUE Delusions dreamt up by a psychotic psyche. The land of eternal infancy, paradise. That's where I'll be."
The above lines. I did like. Delusion and allusion, things we fall into. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[NonsenseTyper]

I am deeply influenced by Jung and Joseph Campbell who in return make me even more interested in Mythology and diving into the unknown!

[Coyote Poetry]

Myth and tale, my favorite. We must read the great writers to become a great writer.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wow! As I said before you write powerful fantasy poetry with such intellect and pathos which is so readable and enjoyable. Love it!

[NonsenseTyper]

I am so glad that you like my writing!
Thank you :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No thank you for writing. Are you really in Iran? Is English not your first language?

[NonsenseTyper]

Yes, I am in Iran!
I study English Literature at the university and my native language is Farsi.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Your English is amazing. Iran is of course famous for its culture and art. My children studied English Literature here in the UK.

[NonsenseTyper]

wish you all the bests :)

[a]

Your writing reminds me of classic authors. This text is evenly aggressive, intense and impressionable. Very good.

[NonsenseTyper]

Thank you :)