Summer Sun

My first haiku

A beautiful day

Summer sun warms me inside

A wholesome smile

Reviews

[Ramsey's Rebellion]

At first I read smile as 1 syllable so it threw me off but now I see what you did there. This is an excellent haiku that captures the essence of the joy found in a beautiful day. I love that this haiku sticks to all the traditions of the art form, especially how you incorporate nature and human themes seamlessly. Good Job!

This is my first review, so I'm not sure what the standards are for rating. :) Good job!

[Imara]

Perfect. What I love about haikus are that they are short and sweet. Yours gets right to the heart. I love it.

[Guavaguy]

It is impossible to describe the indescribable emotions released when reading this haiku. I keep reading it, and every time I do, I imagine myself more and more in a wooded grove in summer. There are flowers, and there are animals, but most of all, there is the sun. And this sun is a comforting thing, I cannot shake its warmth. I guess I am being generous with the one hundred points, but I have never rated a haiku before, so I don't know what to compare it with. So I guess your first haiku is also my first haiku review.