Inside me

This poem is a result of a sleepless night,and we all know those aren't good for us.

It messes with my mind when people say how sad they are

When they say it hurts them so much

When they say they can feel it through their whole body

It messes with my mind when people say how happy they are

When they say it makes them smile

When they say their heart is beautifully wild 

It messes with my mind when people feel

Sadness,happiness,joy,pain,fear,anger,peace

Because it is hard to understand

When all I feel is a big blank

Just emptiness inside

Tearing me apart 

I try to feel it too so I cry and smile

But at the end all I have

Is a numb heart of mine 

Reviews

[luvs2write]

I really liked this and can easily relate to it...you did an amazing job conveying emotion, even if that emotion is a big blank

[J.Paddy]

Maybe it's me,but when I read and re-read this I visualize a country-western singer singing it. It sounds lyrical. Very well done.

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I felt this many times, sometimes in that blank we just have to let things be. Not so easy I know , so of us are thinkers, and we over think in the bounds of life

[CoraZanini]

That is exactly what we need to do but many of us don't know how to. It's a never ending circle!

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That it is:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Gut wrenching emotion in every line. When you feel nothing, it is such a lonely feeling...so sad. You look at others and wonder why you can't be more like them. Truth is, no one has a perfect life....all you can do is make the most of the one you have. Well written. Powerful! Lydi**

[CoraZanini]

Thank you Lydi:) I think it will get better and life just consists of many phases that we all have to go through!

[Sourav]

Strange feelings but it happens with us... a feeling of nothing. well written.

[CoraZanini]

Sourav,thank you on your review.Yes,indeed,it is a strange feeling and not a pleasing one.

[Pax]

I do feel you my friend, I do feel this from time to time, the numbing feeling, the restlessness feeling... all that feelings is what makes us more human, we live, we cry, we smile, we feel - sad, happy, angered or fearful... etc... with all that, we still manage to cope up in our daily lives, what makes us more human is we never stop what makes us feel, just release those negative emotions in creativity like art or in words... keep writing my friend...

[CoraZanini]

I try my best and will continue! Thanks for your review Pax,it means a lot:)

[chitra dhara]

How could you write such beautiful lines if you were feeling numb inside..I know that feeling of emptiness that grips me at times ..but it passes away..one of your best Cora..keep writing!

[CoraZanini]

Such kind word Chitra! Thanks a thousand times

[Dhaye]

Oh, yes. I've experience that. I feel like I am floating so I don't care for any emotion because what I care for is how to make even a nap...for that 4 sleepless nights and days. That was many years ago.

Hope you overcome your problem in sleeping because it really affects your daily decisions.
Keep going.

[CoraZanini]

Just like floating yes! Thank you Daisie!

[MsJewel]

This is so very sad...to not be able to feel...yes sleepless nights can mess with our heads...but hopefully not our heart

:) Julie

[CoraZanini]

We just have to be stronger,thank you Julie:)

[StrixNebulosa]

How I completely understand... others moods are contagious, either in a positive or negative way... admitting this is hard for some, find strength in the fact you can.

[CoraZanini]

It's constant fight but I guess it will be over at some point!Thank you