Coffee tears

Cappuccino foam in Montreal puddles

In my cup of hopes is just rain

Rain

Gleam of fishy smile in your eyes… and splashes

of jazzy-joy sounds struggling my pain

Pain

Just a friend chat, drama-free, Polaroid-type reality

Banal coffee talk, no complaints

Rain

But why is my bare soul in the network of humanity

Lost and found in your hands?

Pain

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good coffee and sadness. At least you are not alone. I like the tale in the poem.
'Just a friend chat, drama-free, Polaroid-type reality
Banal coffee talk, no complain"
Ending made the poem complete. Rain allow the sadness to become one with life. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Muse]

this is cool...the rhymes...the metaphors...it's all very clever.

[Michael X]

such is heart shaping reality to the point of let go, and letting go is sometimes all a person has, because emotional connections can take more strength to break than a person has or is willing to offer, to be
in the pain of confliction, to express or hold back, I like this style,
it's unique. And speaks poetry ^_^

[Revery]

Nona, your style is unique and always has that little extra dimension to it. This is fantastic. Such well woven reality in and out of metaphor. I am afraid this write is real for you, I hope not. 100/100