It's been a while

It’s been a while … we never talked

You never send your vibes

Across the ocean of hopes

Between Berlin and Montreal

 

It’s been a while … it’s all my fault

I disappeared from your sight

I walked away like Lady Bond…

With childish sobs inside

 

It’s been the longest winter night

With icy snowflakes and scars

From freezing fights against myself,

From wounding memories of us

 

It’s been a while… It passed, it died

In my embrace of happy pain

Berlin! Berlin again one day!

… again and over again…

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

That last stanza is awesome!! The poem is pretty, but the end stanza sets in motion this need to champion your happiness to one day see Berlin again! lol I love it. I wish I could tell you how many of MY poems have this theme, but I'm not sure the count. Every line you wrote was incredibly important to make the whole piece work, so nice freakin' job!! : ) xoxo -Mark

[Eloha]

Yes it has been a while, who lives in Berlin!

[Antonio Valentino]

can relate with alot of this.. distance does make the heart, go wander, sometimes doesnt it

being, a while, is not so good sometimes..

thanks for sharing
:)