Champ de Mars love

We could not believe we found each other

In the giant city of love and desire

Among thousand faces, streets, and windows

In smoke of coffee and smell of cigarettes

 

We did not expect our eyes to undress us

In shameless passion of erected souls

In front of tourists, pigeons, and tower

Spilling the clouds in a summer shower

 

We could not imagine how deep we cared

To keep the freshness of our kisses,

Champagne flavored with cheese and… stars

On the bare belly of the Champ de Mars grass

Reviews

[Revery]

Wonderful write Nona. In know your write is about Paris, have you spent any time there. Never been to France. I love Quebec and would love to go back some day. The french cities of Canada have the romantic atmosphere for France. I love your style.

[Aella.lives]

This was so sweet. I can feel the passion with "We did not expect our eyes to undress us"... haha, I can imagine a couple reuniting and kissing in the middle of a street. Beautiful and lovely.

[olla]

this is my first experience with your writing.. it is very nice..

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

For a second, I had to catch myself, I thought for a moment that this was one of my poems! Amazing, I felt this more aesthetically poetic than usual, as if you edited and played with the words for something final and convincing.

Lovely job Nona.

[Nona]

@ Revery, yes! it is a true story! I miss Paris a lot! but Montreal is indeed awesome! you should come to visit one day!