Champ de Mars love

We could not believe we found each other

In the giant city of love and desire

Among thousand faces, streets, and windows

In smoke of coffee and smell of cigarettes

 

We did not expect our eyes to undress us

In shameless passion of erected souls

In front of tourists, pigeons, and tower

Spilling the clouds in a summer shower

 

We could not imagine how deep we cared

To keep the freshness of our kisses,

Champagne flavored with cheese and… stars

On the bare belly of the Champ de Mars grass

Reviews

[Revery]

Wonderful write Nona. In know your write is about Paris, have you spent any time there. Never been to France. I love Quebec and would love to go back some day. The french cities of Canada have the romantic atmosphere for France. I love your style.

[Blue Ivory]

Beautiful piece of writing! Your style, your words, they are so nice (I'm sorry, I'm out of adjectives)! Just know, I really really love this! It's a beautiful description of the scene and the feelings.

[Aehr]

lovey dovey and cute.... i love the title

[Kaya]

This is so beautifully written. Your prose is so elegant and this has such a lovely flow to it.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Lovely poem with good wordings. One film 'an evening in paris' recollected in my mind. With wishes.

[asdarkeyesclose]

'Spilling the clouds in a summer shower'

i liked all the romance of this and the style of writing. fantastic.

[Priya]

I love how you touch upon sight, taste and smell to weave a unique tapestry of emotions. This is exceptional. Desire expressed as clearly as is possible. This is how romantic poetry should be written!

[Michael X]

delicious, your words are a sense of crafted artistry, reflects the beat
poet era, Allen Ginsberg, Jack Kerouac, Gary Snyder..etc..when
interpretation is a sense beyond control, such as poetic possession,
your expression speaks of times, romance and soft facades,
especially an imposing, decorative nature of description, brilliant ^_^

[Nicholas Antonio Young]

This is very good. I like the metaphorical usage and it flows very well too. Good job

[Daniela May]

I am in france atthe moment x i liked this poem a lot x it was sweet, cute and romantic all at once xx well done x