Prison

I don’t want my love be my prison

I don’t want my spring be the season

Of endlessly blossoming trees!!!

Please, don’t make me find any reason,

Forgive me, forget me …

And just let me free!

Reviews

[Neon]

Kindness of love, humanity of peace, love into heart and the breathe of plea.. everything keeps us alive to set ourself free ...

Nice work, am still screaming this poem on mah mind. I love the speed of your rhythm. Beautiful poem... and yeh, nice message you've delivered here that we shouldn't love with someone like we're in prison and our freedom's been lost into somewhere else or we're doin' grab someone' freedom ... but we should love from heart without any pain into the chest or heart's the best way making some love with someone in every season.

In summer, love provides the warmth of it's breeze .. In winter, love covers us like a blanket and in the life, a true love's what that "LET ITSELF FREE".

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The conviction in this resonates in the small amount of words...and the anguish to be released in the lines speak out...

[Inspiring Writer]

This write's filled with your Rhyme and it's well written in your words. I liked this write much, it's short, nice and a powerful poem about the life. Everyone wants to be free... to live free... No one wants to lvie under someone's fear or scare or in orders. Life's free and everyone want to live free. Nice message your dropped into your words. Nice write.

[Wórdsmíth]

It's an unique write, words're powerful and did much work here, and i loved it a lot.
It's a lovely, short, nice n beautiful write, iliked it...it's a nice thought to write such kinda piece.
nice flow of ink.

[Writer #00]

Of endlessly blossoming tree!!

[Writer #00]

The above should be, for grammatical correctness, changed to 'AN endlessly blooming tree' if singular, or add an 's' to tree if plural.

I had to read this when I saw the picture of a blue sky on the otherside of bars and then read the title of the poem...there was something about that prison that seemed beautiful. i saw this in your poem as you compared love to a prison. Nice poem.

sunsh*ne/100

[writing mojo]

this is definitely a jail bird chirp...i hope you are heard loud and clear

[Revery]

Wow Nona, such a passionate write. How are you? Well I hope.

[krish]

WOW..........GREAT BUT DON'T THINK THAT IT SHOULD BE CONTINUE........'
if u don't mind..let's havae alook below.........:-
"A POEM GIVEN BY NONA;WHO TELLS ABOUT HER PRISON,
SHE DON'T WANNA HER LOVE TO BE ON PRISON,
SHE WANN IT TO BE ON WINTER + SUMMMER = SHINING SEASON,
SHE WANN TO FORGET ALL BLOSSMING + GLOOMY'S ALL NEW EDITION;S ,
SHE WANNA BE FREE WTITH HER LOVE IN EVERY SEASON WITHOUT ANY REASON............"

[Nick.B]

If you love someone, you set them free ( or at least that's how I see it), anyway great poem full with emotions, love it