For life...

The ripples from the touch of sunny soft divine ideas

vibrate and burn…

A single tiny pebble stone - a broken piece of omnipresent life -

sank deep…

Down the bottom of my soul… for everlasting query for truth.

I look inside…

The shiny smile of yours, like butterfly of myth, flits high

and bubbles …

You are there - a part of me, a chip in the “software of my mind”

For good and bad…

For life…

Reviews

[Stephen]

It`s a free-verse and I like that one!

You are there - a part of me, a chip in the “software of my mind”
For good and bad…
For life…

Lovely! Impressive and heartfelt lines! Putting Hard-efforts into the life having what we want too is not that easy to do. It takes much time and sometimes, the enough days reflecting the shines of pearls through the beam of prisms but the efforts always bring pleasure when we find smth new and innovative through the forsaken world of our minds and that`s what I find in your piece. Very innovative .. every-time I stop by your pages take a long-breathe reading your stuffs inhaling the aromas of the words. Lovely poem! It's an excellent piece of art!

[Prolific In Verse]

This is truly your native poetic light, that unlike so many of us, you possess the art of poetry in your brain chemicals, and it's unlike academics and unlike artists, for it's the marriage of the two!

I want your grandchildren to have videos and things you wrote, you know?

[krish]

nona u've inspired me..........nice poem..
nona now this 4 u.............
''Nona i liked ur style like a donna,
without shona,u look cemona,
u've write a poem ,it shows ur's heart's view in front of all leona's......

[Clockwork]

I like the sense of moment in this poem. You have a great sense of the images you are writing about and what you want to say. These lines are my favorite: "A single tiny pebble stone-a broken piece of omnipresent life."

[Kaylor Mason]

This is where dreams unfold in the back of the consciousness, and we all enter the realms of our minds at our own risk. This is a wonderful poem! By the way, I read your info page--"the only God I trust is Freedom!" I thought that part was particularly brilliant.

[Eloha]

Nona, Utopia is calling you from the beyond...darling!

[Nona]

ah! you have just read my mind! I feel transparent and naked! wow!

[Eloha]

And I love your spirit Nona....!!

[Revery]

Nona, I love your style. I'm not sure is this is about God or a love, as proclamation, "for life" is so strong. Either would be lucky to be near you beautiful. :)

[Nona]

Thank you! hmmmm... this is about ideas, people, experiences that leave a trace in our souls and change us forever! I apperciate your interest and support! always! :-)

[Grey]

Nice write!!

[Nona]

oh! thanks a lot! :)