Is this real

Is this real

A Poem by Nomo

Outside I stand
The cars parked outside
The snow glistens in the sun
The evergreens sway gently 

Clouds are fluffy and light 
The sky is so blue its clear like a pool of water
I hear birds in the distance
They talk to eachother

Birds speak in their own tounge 
I wonder what they talk about
A cat walks across the street 
Stopping to study me

Today is peaceful
It may not last
But I enjoy it as it does
My thoughts are calm 

One thought does lay within my mind
Only one tugs at me
Only one 
Is this real

© 2021 Nomo


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Good read nice flow enjoyed it



Posted 3 Years Ago


It is nice to have quiet days dear Nomo.
"Today is peaceful
It may not last
But I enjoy it as it does
My thoughts are calm "
The above lines are needed. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this write, nice description here. I like how the cat stopped to study you.


Posted 3 Years Ago


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Today is all we have and this poem is a description of a fully conscious day living in "the now" with all the joys that brings - but still .....that nagging doubt at the end that it might not even be real! I like the references to what the creatures are doing "talking to each other", "stopping to study me" - I like the images these bring to mind so it feels as if I am there in your day.

Posted 3 Years Ago


sounds peaceful with a hint of memories tugging away

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The imagery in this is great, Nomo, I had a feeling of calm wash over me reading this. It's really good!!!

100/100

Nix ❤️

Posted 3 Years Ago



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