Losing you

I lost you once, I don't want to lose you again
It hurts so much when your gone
My mind is in a loop, I can't see straight
Please don't leave again, your the only person left here
Who will be able to understand me
Who will understand my pain
Understand my mind
These voices they keep telling me you left because of me
But no was it your time?
Did "God" take you from me?
I still hear your song in my head
Your voice singing along to those lyrics in the car
Tell you the truth I've gotten worse
I'm not the same
I messed up so bad
I needed your help but your gone
How can I talk to you when your not here
I need you
Tell you the truth I love you
Always been there for me but now your gone
Been gone for a few years
I can't escape the last memory of you I have
Your voice screaming above the sirens
The flames rising above the roof now
It hurts every day, knowing you help me but I can't help you
Your gone and it hurts
You were the only one who understood
You were the only one I could trust
You were the only one I loved

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved and I understood the below lines.
"Tell you the truth I love you
Always been there for me but now your gone
Been gone for a few years
I can't escape the last memory of you I have
Your voice screaming above the sirens"
The above lines. So good. Those ever-lasting memories, we cannot forget. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[barleygirl]

This is a heartfelt message with intense longing that comes across strong. The message feels a little distracted for me becuz you use "your" in about twenty places where it should be "you're" . . . once or twice, we can ignore it. But all over your poem, it looks rough. Otherwise your expression is well-done and powerful (((HUGS)))