Big girl, you are beautiful

Big girl, you are beautiful

A Poem by Nomen
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This is a true story...

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There once was this buxom young girlie

she started her feast bright and early

as she ate, her radio’d hound,

“Big girl, you are beautiful, come ‘round”

 

She stood up right there, and danced in the mirror

and said, “Oy! What a huge posterior!”

© 2011 Nomen


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radio’d hound, might not be a good choice to make the sentence clear. Radio yowled or radio roared might be better.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nomen

7 Years Ago

Yes, thank you Bo. I agree, I think I like "radio yowled"

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