Balloon

Balloon

A Poem by Nomen

You were so high

and i was on a high cloud

 

i smiled and i laughed

 

we were simple

uncomplicated

 

laughter in a vacuum

 

You were stagnant

and i was on a storm cloud

 

i followed and i drifted

 

we were simple

self-pretentious fools

 

emptiness in laughter

© 2011 Nomen


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Girl....ouch. :( The "laughter in a vacuum" and "emptiness in laughter" lines were so upsetting! But this is an awesome piece, I love it. :) You write so much like I think it scares me. Love it!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 10, 2008
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