Bath

Bath

A Poem by Nomen

Sharp teeth

soft neck

Gentle peck

sweet release

 

Lover foe

water moat

Hands on throat

head below

 

 

© 2011 Nomen


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Short yet powerful, for such a small poem it says very much. I liked it very much, a very good poem. The first sentence of the second stanza is my favorite.

Posted 13 Years Ago


So, it's a couple in a bath tub getting frisky and then one drowns the other, right?
I like it!
It says a lot for so little!

~-~Bells

Posted 16 Years Ago


Bit morbid.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 10, 2008
Last Updated on July 10, 2011