Sinking

Mental's import left sudden and scared

parental support diminished, she's bared

coldness sets in, try to escape this death

hardened in trying to escape this death

Everything to lose, she hardly can bide

exposure a risk to decency's pride

 

The tempter he comes, subtle and laced

exempts her and takes her, secretly placed

needfully you, try to accept this rape

weakened in trying to accept this rape

What else could she be, he's ruling this game

reticently safe, resisting insane

 

she's running

   succumbing

she's hiding

   abiding

 

now climbing

   subliming

and coming

   she's stunning

 

The sun has left, all quiet and dark

she comes in swiftly, she's crazy and stark

sickness sets in, try to redeem this life

twisted in trying to redeem this life

Everything's lost, might a sliver remain

some say she's nither to decency's name

 

she's sinking

   rethinking

expecting

   affecting

 

nay hoping

   regroping

reflecting

   rejecting

Reviews

[Seriana]

Girlfriend, this is fabulous! I LOVE it. Where have you been hiding on me? ;) I love your mix of style. You add alot of different elements to your writing, and I appreciate reading it very much. This piece hits a special note with me, and I think you know why. It's tragic and lovely all at the same time. Glad to see you finally posting. Keep it up girl. :)