LOST

Who rules the world and empires the bold

delivers night, possesses cold

i run the tracks of body and mind

search the light i cannot find

and when i sit the edge of a whole

out i cry...may god save my soul

 

i float, i soar, i land safe in flight

sit in lux'ry and clouds delight

i strongly agree, still in decline

i've found the light but cannot bind

and when night dawns i lay down to see

all 's gone but the demons and me...

 

i'm lovely

   i'm ugly

excited

   exhaust

 

i'm climbing

   subliming

in a dream

   reprieve...

 

Who takes me and gives me such these scars

lifts up the world, carries the stars

i run the night and evermore

curse the sun, settle the score...

and as i wait i simply reply

he gave me sight, but stole mine eyes

 

i'm stunning

   i'm cunning

erecting

   my cross

 

i'm tripping

   and scripting

i'm lucid

   i'm lost

 

Reviews

[Seriana]

Ahhhh, thoughts from my own mind. :) Girl, I love this one. I love the rhyming you've done here, and the short little words that read fast through. It's really a very well put together piece. :) I enjoyed it very much!

[Mr. Lopez]

Welcome to the cafe . Your poem is a nice start to what will prove to be an educating and fun experience.There is great rythme in this piece and the rhyme scheme is wonderful as well. I reaaly liked it and hope to see more of your work.

Mr. Lopez