Madness

A Poem by Elli

Adrift.

I never disrespected their belief in the false light, And I never will.
And I haven't still, Because they can believe whatever thy wills.

I've told them I've rejected the false light.
Some don't care, Good, Some call me a fool, Disrespectful, Most say I will return to there, That's where my anger becomes full, And just confirms that I will kill any chance there is to renew.

They don't know it surrounds my heartless body, They don't know I enjoy the darkness.

I use this new found freedom sadly... but gladly as it leads me into being somebody.

I cross between the true light and the darkness, Which makes my life no longer riskless, Because of that my wishes have been fulfilled, I feel like a human again.
I love numbing myself.
I love freedom.

I love the darkness.
I

Madness.

© 2018 Elli

Author's Note

This is the conclusion to this poem I wrote; http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/NoirSuits/2062904/

Please read that one first, Thank u ❤️️

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LazerRays

You are madness... WOW!!!! that's an epic way to end this! This is amazing! I love the emotion in this and the way you build tension and then you end with a sucker punch of a line! Well played! (I've noticed all the anime pics and I totally appprrrooovvee!!!!)
you seem interesting!

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Thank-you Sarah! ❤️️

6 Years Ago

No problem! :) my pleasure :P

Raghib

This is certainly one strong writing. And I can see Mikasa and Eren here. Just a doubt but are these writings somehow related to attack on titan(I am still trying to figure out how).
Anyways this is a fantastic piece of writing. Strong and persuasive. Though the one thing I would like to ask you is Do YOU actually believe being madness is right?