I fell into something

I fell into something

A Poem by NoelAsh

Joe

You know I think of you everyday

I remember you everyday


I fish our memories out of the deepest ponds of my mind

gut them and fry them until the juices have dried

I wring out every bit of emotion and feeling


I listen to our song

I try to forget were I am, and who I'm with

and try to feel your touch again


I churn my stomach and wrench my heart

I rip myself apart from the inside out

searching for you there


I cant see you anymore, or feel you, smell you, taste you, hear you

and that drives me insane

inside out and twisted

© 2014 NoelAsh


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I like the story in the poem. You took the reader to good memories and missed places. I like the complete poem. The ending was my favorite. Some people make us want what we cannot have. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is beautiful. I really like.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very passionate write.
Joe should be proud of you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is filled with so much sweetness and honesty.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

quietly a strong expression emotion , keep the good work

Posted 10 Years Ago



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