Lovers

We are nothing more than humble fires; warming only to the touch of a lovers blush. 

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

To the point...lovely imagery...in few concise words. Nicely done.

[Luke L]

Lovely short, but sexy piece :)

[Nicole]

That's exactly what I was going for. :)

[Luke L]

Well done, lady :)

[SteveB]

While I am not normally a fan of micro-poetry, I was touched by this piece. Beautiful imagery. While I can see the point raised by the earlier reviewer I actually like the use of "blush". It hints at the warming to an intial attraction. Nicely done.

[Relic]

Hmm, after seeing 43 people pass this by I have to wonder why? Would it be better to write
'warming only to the spark of a lover's touch?'