My entrance

I find myself trapped by bodies that move with this continuous stride and feet that march with fashionable certainty. My feet falter sideways to make room as I’m forced to face the faces, forced to catch the eyes that catch on me. Changing direction at this point would only draw more attention. So I step through the exit, reducing in size and I reach for my entrance.  

Reviews

[Ronn Michael Salinas]

more like a story. be bold! :)

[Richielee]

excellent, just one thing i would change, the format would (in my humble opinion) look alot better if set out in lines like a poem,then the great lines you have written would stand out even more and impact the reader more : )

[empty]

wonderful write, leaves room for hope

[FugitiveBalloons]

I like it, reminds me of something my friend once said to me..."You always have to break free of the ant mentality."