Suicide Lullabies

I know this lyric is quite scattered, but, it's a song. When you think about it, song lyrics don't always have to be grammarific and appearing to be well layed out. When this song is sang, it's quite fancy.

Drag me to hell,
with your crying corpse I left on the floor
I taste your tears
Your soul cries for more.

Sorrow
Pain
Regret
Your bitter blood wont let
Me taste.
I'll smile as you bleed,
You'll cry, you'll plead
Mercy has nothing on me.
Cry me a river;
I'll bleed you out a sea.

Paralyzed by the heavy drugs
Or my delicate form that tempts you
I'll be with you soon
Drag me down to hell with you.

Turn my head to see
beautiful suicide;
Scattered on paper
Carved in your heart with blood
As I cry and scream
Nothing will tame your torture
Nothing will silence my eyes

Left behind to find
Me crying in the moonlight
Encourage your suicide
Listen to my lullaby
Cry me out a river,
I'll bleed you out a sea

Don't make me choose
Revenge or Regret,
just drag me down to hell
Rue the day we met;
Die with me
Broken and shattered
glass shards in your eyes
daggers in my heart
Drown us in sin.
A tragic victory.

Drag me down to hell;
Your dying eyes are so tempting
Let me take another slice
at your gorgeous sight.

Each cut brings me closer to you;
closer to death;
I'm already dead.
Let's dance in the pale moonlight;
Soon laying in my eyes
this dreadful lullaby;
Your beautiful suicde.
Don't cry tonight;
tonight we die.

Author's Note

PLEASE comment and critisize, I want to know your honest opinion, don't sugarcoat it.

Reviews

[Dillon Cotter]

this is really good!

[Jane Doe]

this was great very and i think that this is pure i dont even know a sufisticated word to describe it but a a 4 th grader i like look up to u that if u were the older sister that i wanted i will trade u for my two dumwits of a 14 year old and 11 year old for u any day i mean it k

[Boris Jonathan Novak]

Wonderful usage of imagery to convey emotion. Your words flow smooth as ice. I really enjoyed this!

Great work!

[Porcelain_Doll]

this was insane and dark, a beautiful combination of two beautiful things.

[Aekmy]

This was definitely mad crazy, but still really amazing. Great job. ;]

[REALIZE]

"Paralyzed by the heavy drugs
Or my delicate form that tempts you
I'll be with you soon
Drag me down to hell with you."

This was disturbing, demonic, and mad crazy . Thats what I liked bout it. A flow that worked well with the imagery and was for the most part honest. It got a little redundant towards the end. And maybe it was forced a bit but for the most part it was good. good read.