A Sadist's Song

This was the first lyrics I ever published, and as far as my memory goes, the first lyrics I ever wrote. It isn't that notable, but it's point stands clear and I put out what I wanted to put out, and I would never change it one bit.

He runs to her apartment
But hesitates to open the door
He hasn't quite prepared
To be cut to the core
Something cracks in the distance
He bites his lip
And see's his Mistress
armed with her whip.

Stay alive love,
Listen to this pathetic
Sadist's song
Hold your breath as I cut your skin.

Now they try something different
He kisses her boot
and begs for mercy, Just like he's used to.
But then he is told
To get down on his knees
The ground is cold
But his feelings remained seized
Oh God don't let it happen.

Stay alive love,
Listen to this pathetic
Sadist's song
Hold your breath `cuz you might start to like it.

Then she brakes
She shatters her mirror
When he asks what wrong
She says so very clear
"Oh my slave, I've fallen for you"
He pauses then cries
she wipes his red eyes
And he says " I love you too, you make me feel so alive"

Stay alive love,
Listen to this heart captured
Sadist's song
Hold your breath and don't let your heart give in.

He's trapped now
She actually cares for him
How could one fall in love with his Mistress
That is a definate sin.

Author's Note

I know this is not that great as far as descriptive feelings, etc. But like I said, I would never change it, and the person who I wanted to impress with this started to cry, so I'm thinking for the purpose this song had, I did pretty damn good. And I was 13 when I wrote this as well!

Reviews

[Anastasia Starlena]

Great piece very well written. It just goes to show you love knows no bounds. Great piece.

[RainbowFlames]

erotic, nice. pleasure mixed with pain. cool. :)

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is an incredible work of art.
It is unbelievable that it was written
by a child.
The story is within the bounds of
reality, also within standards of
decency.
The choice of words and the
phrasing are perfection
Rated: 100 %
---- Eagle Cruagh

[Succubi]

ahh i like it, its sinister =)

[Porcelain_Doll]

I adore the way you capture the comingling of pain and pleasure. The way its almost gentle, which as any sadist knows, that is exactly how it is.
Beautiful

[fati]

I love this piece. It's a sadist love story. Hard to image that, but you put it in writing. Very nice!!! Or dare I say very gentle in the way you expressed it!!! :)