Jenn with Flow

slowly
gently-
licking
down.

Tracing the light
reflected on your curves,
moving with your sides,
guided by your hands
below-

tasting your wetness.

as nails glide
around you-
loving
only
you.

Reviews

[MorganLyn]

This was a very good piece.
"loving only you."
that was my favorite line.
If only all men felt that way
enjoyable read!
-D

[Enigmatic Amor]

Nicely done. I'm no poet but your poem was very appealing. Sensual. Loved how 'she' urged him on in the middle of the action. Nice touch.

[JC Fox]

This was a beautiful sensual piece, good job with it

[justjenn_2u]

Wow! I don't what to say. I am speechless. A definate tantalizing piece with a wonderful "flow". You're off to a good start.

Thanks for sharing.

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

Very sexual but not in an overbearing way. I really liked it because it was all about her. Even though it was so short it was clear that she was your only focus. :) great job!