Jenn with Flow

slowly
gently-
licking
down.

Tracing the light
reflected on your curves,
moving with your sides,
guided by your hands
below-

tasting your wetness.

as nails glide
around you-
loving
only
you.

Reviews

[After the Blackbird Sin..]

Very provocative. And very short.

[Kathryn]

Very good; it is very passionate, and I like that you could fit that much meaning into so few lines; that takes skill!
☼ K i t t y ☼

[ANNA]

I love how sexy it sounds...I like the picture a lot too!
Your very good on how you word your wirtings...Very passionate to the touch

Anna

[DeMorney]

sensual

[Mistress Sarah - ADULT ..]

Another excellent piece.

[BLFK]

You're very passionate. Vulgar to say the least, but it looks like that's what you like to write. Please understand what I mean by that, I mean it as a compliment. I can't write anything like this. I think you may have thought I meant it in a bad way, I did not. I was very speechless when I completed this piece, and it was amazing. It's expressive. Imaginable.
P.S. I apologize if I sounded mean. Please forgive me. I never intended for it to sound like that.

[Charisma Moonfairy]

I like this one as well. Yet another passionate poem that flows wonderfully. A very great write and read.

[Burr the Story Sorceres..]

I think it is sweet, the passion shared between two people who love each other. The need to take care of them, to see they are happy and pleased.
I liked it.

[badgirl beth]

Right out there once again with our sensuality and sexual escapades of passion....whew..once again..I am enthralled by your write...Cheers;)

[Dani California]

Wow, nice. Very seductive write. Loved it!