Late At Night

this is a poem I thought of as I was heading to bed last night. I thought I would share it with you. please give me some feedback on this

Late At Night

Late at night when everyone is fast asleep,

I'm awake and watching the stars,

the stars are shining bight in the night sky,

Dreaming with excitement while standing in the moonlight,

wish the time would slow down just for tonight,

my energy slips away as realize the time,

I'm preparing for bed late at night,

taking one last glance at the night sky before I close my eyes,

Late at night when I'm finally fast asleep,

I'm dreaming as the moonlight shines in my room,

It's time for everyone to sleep now,

No more talking...Just silence,

As I end this poem late at night, I have 2 last words to share,

those words are Good Night.

Reviews

[mou]

It reminds me about poem 'daffodils' ..how one could leave these beautiful stars alone for sleeping only :)
so clear and soothing words of your that it creates the visualization of that magical night in front of reader's eyes
mou.

[Carolynn]

Aren't the stars wonderful to look at - so glad you take the time to notice them :) good night ;)