Magic

Magic

A Poem by Noa
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I found this picture through Tumblr and a wild muse appeared. I don't know who took this picture; if anyone does, please tell me so that I can give proper credit.

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The hall was filled,
with nothing but reflections;
A temple built of mirrors,
breaking all light.
Windows of water,
flooding with color,
what once was white marble;
brightened at sight.
The glass reached up taller than
perception could confirm,
forming arches beyond earth,
awe induced by fear- and
if there was a place to find it,
if there was a way to hide it:
Magic could live nowhere else
but here.

© 2011 Noa


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Cool poem, I really enjoyed reading it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very beautiful picture and a lovely poem to describe it. Yes, the place is magical but your brilliant choice of words and how you played with them definitely added to its beauty. Job well done. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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simple but good one :) I enjoyed reading. You've created a nice imagery. Your choice of words and how you put them together seems very vivid, pictorial.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple and Beautiful! This was great!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A spectrum of colours, reflecting your words. Lovely prose.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the picture and poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, very beautiful. You described it so well, I didn't even need to look at the picture. :) I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

woops. I accidently did something..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow. beautiful poem. I love that picture :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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